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DAUGHTER OF DANNY N SAM PART 1 by ~bonnybanshey:iconbonnybanshey:





chapter 1 i guess

"Danny i like you" said sam to her reflection she was going to admit her feelings to danny today "SAM HURRY UP DO YOU WANT TO BE LATE FOR SCHOOL" yelled Danny outside sams house "OKAY HOLD ON" yelled sam out her window as she threw on a black number instead of wearing her normal clothes the dress was black but it was a type a girl wear to impress a boy not to mention her parents would not lose it this time since sam had a pink flower that could be removed on it so her parents would still hate the color but atleast they think she was outgrowing being goth as she got some matching high heels and she left her house "sam is that you" said danny wide eyed "yeah i decided to wear something different" said sam "you don't look like yourself"said tucker behind danny "guys lets get to school race you" said sam as tucker took off running sam grabbing danny to show she wanted them to be alone

"Danny i have something to tell you" said sam "yeah sam" said danny "I l....." was all sam said when she was blasted by a girl that looked alot like Ember only her hair was green and in pigtails "SAM" screamed Danny as he went ghost and went after the Ember look alike "Oh yeah the ghost kid my mom had trouble beating" said the ghost "and will still have trouble beating" said another ghost she had shoulder length white hair with a mini ponytail her clothes where similar to danny's only it was a black dress with a white belt and white gloves that stopped at the wrist with white combat boots "GEES CAN I GET WHAT I WANT WITHOUT YOU GHOST GIRL STOPPING ME" she said angry "uh no Emma maclain" said the girl zapping Emma to the next town "Okay who are you" said danny to the mysterious ghost girl figuring another attempt from vlad at cloning him "I'd answer but if i was you i check on your friend" she said vanishing "OH MY GOD SAM" yelped danny rushing back to her "Ugh what happen" said sam rubbing her head danny laughing as he was happy sam was okay

"So your saying a new ghost kid came in and saved sam" said tucker skeptical "I know it sounds strange but she knew the name of that ghost which is strange" said danny as tucker walked up to a girl in a purple like jumper with orange stockings and glasses and a pink bow "Hi I'm tucker and your" said tucker as the girl said "So not yours" she said "hey sorry about tucker he always does this with girls" said Danny "It's okay My names Dolly Featherton" she said "I'm Danny" he said "Sam" said sam jealous as she saw this girl as a new threat "so when did you get here" said tucker to Dolly "this morning" she said "that sounds suspicious" whispered sam to danny "sam she's a new student" said danny shrugging her off sam stared steamed at Dolly unaware of what was to happen next

a couple more fights with new ghosts led by emma daughter of ember (because i want to hurry to sam discovering who the ghost girl is) sam saw the ghost girl land sam could see her but she couldn't see sam the ghost girl changed back to her human form but sam gasped because the girl was Dolly "I KNEW IT YOU ARE HER SO WHAT WERE YOU TRYING TO DO HUH TRYING TO GET DANNY BY USING YOUR POWERS HUH HUH" yelled sam danny to far to here "MOM STOP SCREAMING" moaned Dolly sam going bug eyed "D-d-d-did y-y-you j-j-just call me mom" said sam shocked "yes i'm your daughter" said Dolly "But how" said sam "Am I here well i'm here because Vlad who rules the world in my time wants to prevent me from existing so they're after you because some time after your pregnant with me dad or Danny as you call him is captured i'm trying to avoid your death" said Dolly

"wow i have an idea now" said sam "really?" said Dolly confused "yeah let them zap me" said sam Dolly ready to scream at that idea but sam continued "then place a shield around me when the shots hit remove the shield and i'll lay there like i'm dead" said sam "okay" said dolly "HEY LOOK THERE SHE IS KOUGER" screamed a girl on a chopper "I SEE HER JOANY 13" he screamed as he fired at sam dolly quickly shielding her mother once the shot was vaporized the shield was brought down and when the smoke cleared there was what appeared to be a dead sam "alright you guys did good" said emma opening a time portal to they're time and left "mom i'm staying" said Dolly "why they think i'm gone" said sam "yes but you'll still be in danger i won't be seen but i will be with you mom" said Dolly and vanished sam now knowing her daughters existance depended on her admitting to danny she liked him ran to danny and blurted "DANNY I LOVE YOU" Danny stared blankly he never thought sam liked him "Danny i wanted you to know because anything could happen"said sam hearing this danny took sam to his house his parents were out of town apparently they were able to find a convention for ghost hunters

"sam i love you too" said danny as he began to remove his clothes sam removing hers they weren't worried about jazz not only was she out she never enter danny's room and they began to make love sam was kissing danny danny kissing her eventuely they where just laying there holding on to one another eventuelly sam got dressed and went home she was right on time for her curfew her parents were none the wiser until she started having strange cravings and morning sickness so they took her to a doctor where they're fear were comfirmed sam was pregnant they demanded the name of the boy sam said she was raped by a member of the football team to protect danny

the football team had to forfeit the next game because of what sam said "sam your pregnant" said danny "yeah with a little girl" said sam "how do you know its a girl" said tucker who had been listening "i just know" said sam 6 months past and sam was wearing maternity clothes despite they had flowers but she figured she wear it since her parents didn't force her to have an abortion she decided to thank them to wear the maternity wear they bought for her despite they said she should not marry so young sam married danny after school her and danny went to a store to buy baby clothes for her unborn child when skulker broke threw the wall he grabbed sam "Unless you want me to vaporize her you'll come easy" said skulker Danny not risking sam or his unborn child gave himself up and was drug off by skulker sam sat crying as she watched her husband her life her world and her unborn childs father drug away

sam explained to danny's parents what happen so they went looking eventuelly when they couldn't find danny all they could do was mourn and pray that if he was still alive he be able to get back sam asked jazz if she be her breathing partner since danny had been taken jazz agreed because danny had told her soon after sam had told danny found out that she jazz fenton would be an aunt and the day finaly came on October 31 a baby girl was born she was named Dolly Jazz Fenton when sam was alone with her new daughter she said "be ready kid your needed to save your dad"

to be continued
©2006-2009 ~bonnybanshey
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Author's Comments

this is after danny defeats his evilself and time has been changed so his daughter from the future will end up appearing to stop her parents from being prevented meeting she will vanish so sam can continue to raise her past self when danny is captured i may do this as a continuation story and please bear with me punctuation is my weak point here is a link to the second part [link]

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:iconlittlee88:
Like the story! it was really good even if it was only chapter 1
:iconlittlee88:
Like the story! it was really good even if it was only chapter 1
:iconbonnybanshey:
thx its pretty much only 5 chapters unfortunetly i have writers block so the last part is taking awhile

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that is oaky with me!
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hope you read the rest

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Wow! You have talent to write ffics. I got fainted when i read one of those paragraphs. That fic remembers me a mexican movie named "punto y aparte".

This moment is traumatic... i liked the fic... (Me gets fainted again)
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thx i've always been a good writer i got many awards for my talent in writing

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this is pretty good, even though i'm not all that familiar with Danny Phantom. my only suggestion would be to use punctuation. like, periods, commas, exclamation points, etc. ^-^

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i know i suck at punc.

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XP. try to use .'s and s's and ?'s and stuff and don't do run on stuff. stuff like that sux poop. u should read subaku-no-rosy's writing and get a better idea for it. also that kinda sux poop. ^.^.

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